[4078] Petals

Hi! This is a piece I submitted here some time back. Reworked some parts of it, and I'm looking for another batch of feedback now.

Some specific things I would love opinions on:

• There was major confusion about the chronology of events last time. Is my timeline still confusing?
• There's a stream-of-consciousnessy paragraph. Does it work well where I used it?
• I broke some rules with the dialogue. Does it fit the piece, or would conventional be better? Do you confuse the dialogue with the texts?
• Was Anna justified in what she did?

Enjoy! https://docs.google.com/document/d/13H-E0DR7GGgXMsVujoSv2PdlyhyPubytZeONed84vfA/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks. :)

Past critiques: 2813 and 1427, both with line by line commentary on the doc itself as well.