Me

Feedback Received!

You came to me when I was young

You explained how life would go

Your voice echoed in my ears

Your words etched inside my soul

You told me I was going to die

And there was nothing I could do

I cried and cried when you told me

That mom and dad would soon die too

You told me to just stay in bed

To always go back to sleep

Because sleep is good practice for death

And that’s how I’d spend eternity

You told me that I didn’t need friends

And family didn’t matter

You told me I’d wind up alone

And you said those word with laughter

Then one day I sent you away

With water and a swallow

I thought about you less and less

you were gone, but I felt hollow

Eventually I missed you

Even though you brought such pain

You were like a drug in a needle that gave me life

That needed first to puncture a vein

You only told me the truth

While the world just spews deceitful words

And while they persecute you

They wonder why I want to leave this earth

Sometimes I give you a call

When I feel alone

When I see through their stupid lies

Or sometimes when I’m stoned

And when I hear your voice

My heart turns to ice

Because as much as I hate the words you say

I know you must be right

Links:

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8yocn2/comment/e2cikia?st=JJKLDS2S&sh=b3b45025

  2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ylbhz/comment/e2ch4hu?st=JJKLECJS&sh=66947a2c

Posted Jul 13, 2018, 11:10 PM UTC

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