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JonahRaeH

always remember

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always remember your first love,

and the second,

even the third.

the truth is, my son, no one forgets the people they love;

neither truly, nor permanently.

for there are many rooms in the house of your heart;

and all that matters is who receives the most space.

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1 - [Comment 1] (https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8yhdec/comment/e2csn6l?st=JJKRGAV8&sh=2da0834d)

2 - [Comment 2] (https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8yopvx/comment/e2csclo?st=JJKR9CEU&sh=11500027)

Posted Jul 14, 2018, 2:05 AM UTC

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