[3165] The Transcendentalists (prologue and chapter 1)

First post boiiis,
Welcome to the world of the Transcendentalists, where Dwarves live in trees, Elves live in mines, and magic is a non-renewable resource.

Critiques I've done:
On "Materials" (1855)

and on "Lord Alden Ewart's Agency for the Paranormal" (2567)

bonus critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zan16/welcome_new_members_from_rwriting_all_users/e2ip0dn/?context=3

edit: fixed broken link