[2567] Lord Alden Ewart's Agency for the Paranormal V2

My attempt at a Victorian Era Paranormal Mystery. Take 2 :)

The google docs link

My critiques:

[Critique 1, 870 words] (https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zhrla/870_ch1_of_the_stolen_flame/e2jlqzw/)

[Critique 2, 1502 words] (https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zhnnp/1502_blerg_2_electric_blergaloo/e2jn2cs/)

Total of 2372 words

Edit: since this gathered a bit of attention, if any of you would like to follow more casually than constant critiques, you can find the weekly updates here:

https://tapas.io/series/Lord-Alden-Ewarts-Agency

If you subscribe you will get a notification when the next part is published, so you won't have to go digging for it :)