[2767] Jade (Chapter 1)

This is the first chapter of a book I'm writing. I would gladly take advice on making a better android

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pYfLDYwFNB2lyf_-4UsF_4n0NHeiMeGAC4oPh3YHTDw/edit?usp=sharing

Proof that I'm not a leach:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zo33k/3165_the_transcendentalists_prologue_and_chapter_1/e2kg82v/?context=3

Let the pain begin