[1000] A different perspective (title subject to change)

Hi! So this is the start of a coming of age novel i've recently started working on and it would be greatly appreciated if you could take the time to critique is thus far. Word count [1000].

Link to doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D2pQ411hqPPvxw4i_G9lCtVidUFtwHkErEENc2WGNCY/edit?usp=sharing

Link to previous critique: [1100] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8yy9py/1121_my_boy_short_story_on_drug_abuseinner_demons/e2kk97w

Thanks in advance!