"Truth is upvotes feel nice. But at what price? They give me license to think “Hey, maybe I don't stink at this.” Again the cost?" 
I love this part! But I think "soul laid bare" is a bit clichè, could be replaced maybe with something like "vulnerable" something simple sometimes can be so powerful. Anyhow, just a suggestion. Otherwise, I loved the first half :)

What I do is put three blank lines in tweet the lines of text and then in the middle blank line I place a double hyphen --

I cannot figure out how to make a stanza break for the life of me.  I try double enter but no matter what I do it all is just double spaced.  Help!

The truth is the last five lines don't really make me happy.  If anyone has any suggestions I'd be very open to them.  

Click, click, click, click

Back and forth that little tick.

I'm confessing I'm obsessing

on perceptions.


Truth is up votes feel nice.

But at what price?

They give me license to think

“Hey, maybe I don't stink at this.”


Again the cost?

Perhaps I've lost something of myself

when I put myself out there--

Vulnerable.


But I won't stop--

Because to stop would mean I don't learn.

I earn my keep

And I will keep at it

Hopefully.



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