[1421] Resonance Chapter 1

First chapter of a completed novel (81,000 words of science fantasy). Working through another draft of the other chapters, but this one is about as good as I can make it without another set of eyes.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QooNaMP2_V4xoWeey1-DCX99mU26Oh2hcsuRqM4z0T0/edit?usp=sharing

I've done about a half dozen critiques. Here's a few of them:

[1699] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/90sfda/1699_child_pov_attempt_dark_fantasy_v2/e2u7xqv

[2567]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zm2eb/2567_lord_alden_ewarts_agency_for_the_paranormal/e2kiit2

[5136]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/90tv3q/5136_the_transcendentalists_chapter_3_now_with/e2ug3j0