[2509]Lord Alden Ewart's Agency for the Paranormal (Chapter 2)

Hello once more Destructivereaders!

I've finished the draft of my second chapter today, and I'd love to hear what you guys have to think. It's a rather exposition/dialogue heavy chapter, and those always need a bit of a heavier finish in the editing phases.

I am also thinking about a new working title: The Paralogic Cases. Tell me if you feel that is better/worse than the current one.

You can read Chapter 2 here

The 'official' draft, with the Prologue and Chapter 1

If you like reading, but don't feel up for giving critique on every single damn chapter, I do publish my chapters more casually when they're 'refined' on this site + some extra drafts.

My critiques: The Transcendentalists Prologue + CH1 [still about half's worth left] https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zo33k/3165_the_transcendentalists_prologue_and_chapter_1/e2tq5bm/

The Transcendentalists CH2 https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/909vr6/2843_the_transcendentalists_chapter_2/e338oiu/