The dove
Here dove lands
On broken stone
With broken wing
Never alone
Mending stone
Mending wing
No more pain
No more sting
Now dove flies
Never alone
But here it stays
The broken stone
(First poem in a while, would like some advice)
Edit: Saw the rule about feedback, so here are the links.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/92z0mv/perception/e39zvep?utm_source=reddit-android
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/931gq9/amphibian/e39zs1k?utm_source=reddit-android
Posted Jul 30, 2018, 6:08 AM UTC · edited
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