[Feedback Request] Sunny

You burned my skin and my retinas

while you kept telling me how good you were for me.

You were way too good to me.

You were never salty air or Vitamin D.

You were scorching light and high waters;

I didn't know how to swim at the time

and my skin's too sensitive anyway.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/92z0mv/perception/e3a4ctc/?context=0

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/91b59d/to_the_lover_i_didnt_love/e2xp7m6/?context=0