r/OCPoetry•8 yr. ago

Peace

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This poem is taken from my poem collection "Sorrowness Vol. I" (you can find it on wattpad)

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Crimson lies within my eyes

Standing still, darkness all around

As I rest calmly on my mattress

Will I be able to leave behind my past?

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My mind is clear

I can feel the numb

Cold wind reaches my skin

Getting closer to the other side

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As I lay thoughts reach my mind

If I did anything right, I shut,

I close my eyes slowly

A realm I am seeing

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Joy and happiness, song of birds,

Lucent figure holds my hand

I take off, this was my sentence

Her sobbing won't take me back

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Calling out my name, desperation reaches

I no longer perceive myself

As the human I once was

Eternity I have become

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Apologizes if I did something wrong, I am new to reddit :)

Posted Jul 30, 2018, 8:16 PM UTC