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In the woods I roamed

With friends through an everchanging environment

There was an opening from the woods

We entered a field of grassy green marshes

When I turned around my friends were gone

From behind a tree came a perfect reflection of myself

He wore a black suit with a red tie

“Hello” he said

I was too scared to reply

There was a body at his feet

Another reflection covered in dirt

The face was green and the eyes looked in different directions

Flies surrounded the corpse

They filled his mouth and nose

The sky went dark

A pure blackness with a bright yellow moon

I run at the myself

He runs away

I follow him across the marsh field

Roots in the ground trip me

Head first I’m sucked into the marsh

Mud begins to fill my mouth and throat

I sink farther and farther

The pressure makes my head nearly pop

I slip into a cave

An inexorably vomiting of the mud starts

Maggots pour out of the mud I puked

The caves air is well below freezing

The walls expand and contract and have a boiling heat to them

There’s a darkness pouring out the end of the cave

I make it outside through the wall of dark

The sun is black

The sky is a pure white

Trees are shades of blue and red

They breath audibly and visibly

The trees talk to me

I can’t understand them

The shrieking of the trees has an unbearable tone

All at once they scream at me

Their pain in unmatched

My dark reflection appears

Wearing a suit of jagged rusty metal armor

He bears and axe with images of my life

My family and friends are on it

There features have been twisted and perverted

The reflection swings the axe violently and sporadically

Trees are cut down

This time the sound is paralyzing

My ears pop and blood pours out

The fiend continues his assault on me

Energy is not there

The air is dense and my breathe can’t catch it

Running won’t work

I have no weapons or armor

The fiend charges

I hug his armor

Rusty metal pierces my body

Blood starts pouring out of my

The fiend just smiles as I pass out

I’m in my body again with my friends

I’ve lost myself

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9373ej/glowing_holy_hell_with_a_dirty_smell/?st=JK9UULEK&sh=22ad03c6

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/92yykq/satan/?st=JK9V09OX&sh=212066be

Posted Jul 31, 2018, 1:49 PM UTC · edited

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