[471] Daydreams of August

This work is about suicide but it is not directly mentioned in this excerpt. Let me know how to make this better.

Link to text:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wj5T2f7VSGpneKKBG9jsFkbdnPuiErXz_ooqgaperd0/edit?usp=sharing

My first shot at a critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/95hjtb/494_forgotten_crimes/