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They can't see through

my melanin soaked skin

to know what's within,

their sight stops short

at my epidermis,

their brains go - “I got this -

“He is definitely

a blue-collared tan-man

making ends meet,

the substrata of society,

a burdened helping hand,

conflicted locksmith or thief.

“So hi, lowly subordinate,

do you also have this in silk?

Where can I find the soy milk?

I'm talking to you, good sir,

don't you work here brother?

Fine, I'll just go find another.”

Doesn't help that I'm innocuous,

just a wee cranky, dressed lazy.

I should get suave, superfluous,

and actually look very ordinary.

Can't go around being mistaken

for someone with life and a story.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/95trkh/the_first_poem_ive_ever_written_hate/e3vv7qo?utm_source=reddit-android

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/93qjbv/persephone/e3hlx6d?utm_source=reddit-android

Posted Aug 9, 2018, 1:36 PM UTC · edited

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