Too polite

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What can be the meaning of this greeting?

You say "Hello, how are you?" like you care.

But somehow I can't find in our last meeting

a glint of common ground that we might share.

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You say you want a friendly disposition

from the people you encounter in your life.

Politeness forced on me's an imposition.

You're avoiding anything that causes strife.

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Your saccharine ways belie your true aggression.

I know you’d like to punch me in the gut.

Your courtesies give off a false impression.

Admit it to yourself; your kind words cut.

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Posted Aug 10, 2018, 12:33 AM UTC · edited

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