Our picnic

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I'm hungry and I need a break.

Let's have a picnic by the lake.

Come on! Let's go! I'm in the mood.

We’ll bring some drinks and yummy food.

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I'd like a turkey sandwich, please.

Can you add a slice of cheese?

A bag of chips, a sour pickle--

Oh how ants on hands do tickle!

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I ate my sandwich. Now it's crumbs.

How ‘bout peaches? How 'bout plums?

Both so juicy! Both so sweet!

Is there something else to eat?

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There's not much left. It's almost gone.

Look there goes a pretty swan!

Watermelon and dessert--

Whipped cream? Why yes, I'll have a squirt.

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Now I'm full; I think I'm done.

Let’s just lie here in the sun.

Thanks for coming here with me.

We'll have the next one by the sea.

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