Reasons
I take a trip to the attic of my mind
A window, a table, a chair
I take a seat, and enjoy the sunset
Because x, because y, because tea
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The tea floods my mind with happy memories
A night sky full of shooting stars
The embrace of a fire
And the kiss of the ocean’s breeze
This is my happy place now
Because x, because y, because tea
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I take a trip to the attic of my mind
A light bulb hangs dimly over the scene
My mind gets all fuzzy, and I don’t know what to do
Because s, because t, because you
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Greater than butterflies, I’m gifted with the entire zoo
It’s a lovely chaos
No blood, no tears, just love
I’m sure of one thing that’s true
This is my happy place now
Because s, because t, because you
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I take a trip to the attic of my mind
Where I can once again harness my pen with ease
The brush flows harmoniously against the paper
Because tea, because you, because me
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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98ek0k/been_a_while_since_i_posted_this_is_for_the/
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98eo5a/the_way_of_spirals_and_circles/
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First post here; I've never really received in-depth criticism before, so I'm curious to what you all have to say. edit: trying to fix spacing
Posted Aug 18, 2018, 10:34 PM UTC