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the lake mirrors my crystal tears

as i mourn from heavenly fears

my aching heart which no one feels

tortured my body through the years

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moonlit forest extends to sea

its convergence brings hope to me

only to be destroyed by thee

leaving pain and despondency

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still the trees gleams its brilliance

the wind catches its luminance

brought to my shattering radiance

devoured by your brusque repugnance

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as time moves its own strong hands

the pitch-black ocean hums and shuns

the white devil who growls then howls

my name which burden madly guns

•mienless•

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/98j0ty/comment/e4h96g5

  2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/983sia/this_is_the_way_things_are_from_the_view_of_a_14/

Posted Aug 19, 2018, 8:35 PM UTC · edited

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