What good is it

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What good is it?
To have a man that makes me feel just as alone as a bachelorette?
What good is it?
To be shackled here without one benefit?
What good is it?
For my heart space to be occupied by a tenant that neglects it?
What good is it?
When that tenant doesn't give love but merely collects it?
What good is he?

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Posted Aug 24, 2018, 4:50 AM UTC · edited

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