Forest of Rifles (Feedback appreciated)
I witnessed power grow
from the barrel of a gun,
a sprout of power soughed
where violence could be done.
At first, it was a seedling,
pushed up through chambers.
Slender as wings of reedling;
angry as embers.
Seedling grew to sapling
delicate in barrel –
blued steel with powder dappling –
end to endless quarrel.
Sapling grew mature:
I heard it as report,
or snap of snare,
or crack of quirt.
Smokey leaves and boughs
of a tree hale and ancient,
violent grove aroused,
yet, power is not agent.
What propaganda by this deed?
What tyrant now accede?
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9b0lxo/manic_depressive/e4zfygf
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9as9bc/autumn_leaves/e4zem5v
http://leftist.space/forest-of-rifles
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Posted Aug 28, 2018, 5:14 PM UTC · edited