[2575] Jade Chapter 3

Faster than last time, and I've tried to improve my prose. I'm looking for any critique but a segment on my prose would be nice. Thanks for commenting

Link the Chap 3

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrIFSeC4pCTLxOjPZZwBQYFLZZzcIwLxy9iHz7k56Rk/edit?usp=sharing

Proof that I'm not a Blood sucking Leach

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/9aprf7/3419_synaptica_strands/e4zv6zu/?context=3

That first two chapters for people who haven't read them.

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zpk42/2767_jade_chapter_1/

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/96ir83/3664_jade_chapter_2/