Finnegans Lake

This is a short ode to James Joyce. It's a bit of an experiment.

oer te brimy shores o' lagoon and lake
whare catwalls runn and toes awaake
there liase a beech ashoare
wit temptres corl
toe te drems they wake
evry hour take
toa toooa tooooa......shake
a wake
corl a whirl
ah spin an fin
parhaps ther fin
exites te enn

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