Minds I's

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When I'm tight​

I'm right

In the mind

Is where I find

No need for exaggerated rewinds

Memories

The best of me

The worst of me

But all of me

Is what you see

A pixel

A dot

A random slice

I am not

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Posted Aug 31, 2018, 1:51 AM UTC

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