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Maes4577

Less Fortunate

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Born into a rich family

enrolls into a university 

and she travels abroad

exploiting the poor and weak

are poor people worthless?

are the ones who dropped out

to help their families less intelligent?

Since I did not go to university 

Does that make me less educated?

Yet, I have a superabundance of books

on my shelf; each page changes my life

each page builds up my perspective 

I see sad sullen eyes out there

Homeless people starving and turning to drugs

Single Mothers working various odd jobs 

To give their children some form of a future 

A future that does not lye in this place

I hope you can become stronger every day

Never let this world stop you

with its superficial standards and materialism

Keep thriving and make the most 

you can, money does not buy character

and happiness triumphs intelligence 

We can make it out of this together

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Posted Sep 2, 2018, 12:55 AM UTC · edited

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