[1092] Fresh Meat and Old Blood

Hi all. This is a short story I'm developing for a course I'm currently completing. I'm eager for any and all feedback, so please don't sugar-coat your response.

Some questions:

1. What's your interpretation? What do you think the underlying message/s are?

2. Is there any aspect that you feel is underdeveloped?

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Fresh Meat and Old Blood

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