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i need light-blocking curtains (not a real title)

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I awoke to a day

made of molasses;

not unlike the too-warm

comforter we were

still wrapped in, slightly damp

the weight of the minutes

shifting and smothering

our bodies as we drowned

​

in our own malaise

seconds ticked by

filling the austerity of the room;

white and bare,

a perpendicular pair of hands

illuminated by a single

tear of the blinds.

​

Comments:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9d1px0/addiction/e5gdsqe

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9d0p3v/wrote_this_poem_on_my_phone_when_i_was_drunk/e5gdiw9

Posted Sep 5, 2018, 8:20 PM UTC

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