I want you to hurt me, darling

I want you to hurt me, darling,

With slaps to the face and bites on my lip;

Liven my grey soul:

Darkness from me strip.

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I want you to hurt me, darling,

With lashes of leather and thongs of twine;

I know you enjoy this:

So make my living corpse thine.

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I want you to hurt me, darling,

With knives to the skin and pins to the flesh,

Allow blood to drain from me:

Come on, in its cool fountain you may refresh.

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I want you to hurt me, darling,

With blades upon my fruitless manhood;

Remove it with vigour and fling it to the fish:

Let my race be gone for good.

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So that I may never sow my cursèd seed

In one less worthy than yourself.

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For I want you to hurt me, darling:

The real pain hides,

It is not red;

I want you to kill me, darling:

So put a bullet through my head.

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My feedback:

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9eqto5/i_wonder_why_it_took_you_so_long_to_kiss_me/e5qu9oh

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9eivsz/the_everknowing_heart/e5qurcr