Peat Cathedral

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I walk in shadow Bearer of love Disciple of life.

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Upon the blood haze horizon,

Fern and branch bask

In the sickly glow—

Acolytes of mire.

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The land breathes in hiss

And sigh—it heaves banks of fog

Pluming, choking the sky.

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II

Perched upon a wall of willow,

A pair of owls, watching--

With questioning eyes

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My reply:

“I trawl these murky waters

In search of gilded flower:

Bloom of peace and twilight hour.”

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With a gargoyle glower,

Right-bird stoops low:

“You better turn back kid,

And I’ll tell you why:

This place is death—

And love it will deny.”

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To the left, a stony smile

And grey feathers ruffled

By a laugh of wile

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“Ignore this ‘ol downer son,

For our bog is holy—

A temple of life

And a refuge for the lonely.”

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The willows wailed in pendulum sway

As the cattails creaked open

And displayed the way.

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III

I walk in light

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Upon grassy aisle

Lush with the water of sanctum’s power

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Beneath firefly liturgies

Flickering in cadent reverence

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Before gilded altar

Wreathed in lily flower

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It sits empty,

Barren.

IV

Bearer of Apathy

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I sink to the dirt

Kneel before the hollow throne

And plead for an answer, for love

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From the chapel briar

A dirge drifts

Gator bellow and Cicada choir

Shudder the earth as the chorus lifts:

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“To the Blasphemer and Liar,

Hellfire! Hellfire!

To the Heathen and Denier,

Hellfire! Hellfire!”

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Run from the noise

Run from the madness

Run from their words,

Full of hate and sadness

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V

Disciple of Death

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Deeper into the sludge I

Travel—ripping, tearing as

The dreams unravel

I hiss and I sigh—

The cypress inhales a reply:

Gnarls and knees rise from below,

Pull me, and I let go.

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Embalmed in scarlet ichor,

I sink beneath the loam.

A Crypt of Isolation,

A Catacomb of the Soul.

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Posted Sep 11, 2018, 12:36 AM UTC

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