My first poetry post! Untitled. (FEEDBACK)

Bitten nails,

flaking skin,

chipped polish

and shaking hands...


            Inhale

Exhale

 Calm down...


Puffy eyes,

chewed lips,

heart racing

my body pacing.


           Inhale

Exhale...

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