The Pearl of Pressure (Written while in residential)

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Theres a girl in the corner

with tear stains on her eyes

from the places she's wandered

and the shame she can't hide...

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My first poem while in residential. Due to the feedback on my last post, I think I will post more of the 15 pages of poetry I wrote while there. The story behind this is that I tried to stupidly confess feelings to a girl. I wrote a super long poem that was a work of art on this topic, but for some reason it won't show up as a saved draft and I cannot find it anywhere.

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9gcki5/bolder/e635pkw

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9glti9/plaster_walls/e65f9w1

Posted Sep 17, 2018, 7:40 PM UTC

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