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i walk on sunbathed pavement,

searching for two kittens

under parked cars.

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i walk for minutes and find the white mama cat

chilling next to a sedan,

old and wary.

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but not wary enough!

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i pat her brown-spotted nape when she closes her eyes,

and she doesn't budge an inch.

she's not wary at all.

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just where are this hag's happy kids hiding?

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9gw659/living_the_dream/e6c2itf/?context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9h2o3e/the_absence_of/e6c3if2/?context=3

Posted Sep 20, 2018, 7:39 PM UTC · edited

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