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Airtight

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Some time today

My tears will fly away

In a container, airtight

I'll say such a fine day

Out of my head

Hey! Hey!

Keep it away

store high in transit

Don't let it get close to me

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(For some context, these are actually lyrics to a song I wrote. They might work better as some lyrics, however I thought they might have had some poetic value)

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9hp013/how_terrible/e6h6h5b

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9hxdzc/z/e6h6a0h

Posted Sep 23, 2018, 5:55 AM UTC

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