I’m in a hate my life period.

I’m in a hate my life period.

Because I hate my life – period.

But it’s alright because it’s a period.

So I’ll get out of this – period.

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EDIT: I did not think any of y'all would like this... wow. Thanks for reading! I'm actually an amateur rapper and poet so I've never really learned any rules or took any classes, to be honest I barely know grammar so having any feedback is awesome and the fact some of you actually liked it is super cool. Thanks so much for taking the time!!