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Mayotte

An idle thought

Feedback Received!

Can I write a story
of sitting across from you?
Can I indulge with squirmy shivers
the infinitely short infinity
in the curve of your mouth,
the deep of an eye like a forest edge
where a deer raises its head
and looks to see who has come?

How will I begin?

     

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Posted Sep 29, 2018, 12:19 AM UTC · edited

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