Fall as an unsure Haircut

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Fall as an unsure Haircut

(arrives between fingers) skill

fully parting branches where

scamper squirrels bury

oaks strong and over

turn leaves bruised from

scissor wind

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cutting everything skillfully

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Fall as an unsure

Haircut from the view

of a frozen cat-tail

bordered pond (skill

fully cutting Dead,

and combing Breath

while scamper squirrels

horde roots) and

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snips without feeling (what I've seen

from him) replacing color with

it's absence (as it should, and will

continue to do so)

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Author's Note:

This is a sorta experiment where I'm trying to imitate e. e. cummings' poem "Spring is like a perhaps hand".

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Medals

Peaches ll

Posted Sep 30, 2018, 8:32 PM UTC · edited

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