[906] - The Cadmean Plant

Hi all!

I wrote this short story to add to my bank of short stories that I can use in my final exams that are coming up soon, but it gets mixed feedback.

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Any criticism is appreciated!

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Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wDKG98GnOyInQD7nzpeA9N68chDCE3DUu-xbyFfFFc8/edit?usp=sharing

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Review: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/9kco5t/894_israeli_underdog/e6yom7x

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Thanks!