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Six Words

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Two poems I read and critiqued:

God is Dying

Prom (?) (not sure of the title)

~ ~ ~

In death of
Every fare

There's one thing
The dying share

The same six words
On their lips:

"Please, God, no,
Not like this..."

Posted Oct 1, 2018, 5:43 PM UTC

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