Undressing Fondly

I'll remember that dress fondly,  
The one from the night we met,  


I'm sure you remember, 
Draining the wine and undressing,  
Fondling.  


The next evening alone,  
The setting sun,
Was but a flaccid cock.  

This is the first thing I've written in years, if you could give me a critique or just let me know if you like anything about it I'd really appreciate it.

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