The Rain

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The rain, the gray

Makes my mind wander away

A hopeless feeling, simply dull

It permeates my skull

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But the flowers need the rain

Because the rain helps sustain

Our world and it's beautiful terrain

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So with my mind I fight

To see the rain as a beautiful sight

To channel my focus,

Because have you ever noticed

After a treacherous storm

The sky miraculously transforms

As the sun begins to show

Mesmerizing you with its radiant glow

Yes, those stunning luminous beams

Are the most breathtaking sight I've ever seen

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Posted Oct 5, 2018, 5:25 PM UTC

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