Stranger [1729]

This is my first time posting here on destructive readers and I’m looking forward to the criticism. I’m writing this for a small contest at my school and I’d say the genre is Dark Fantasy but I’m really looking for a way to make it creepier and more scary because that’s really what it’s suppose to do and I feel like it’s not really accomplishing that.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11L_1CtUQ1kDk-_FvhTk4-eUy45K3cPCuvivdBJ-DfJ4

Critique: {1784} https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/9mwb4i/1784_the_barn/?st=JN3OF83X&sh=8329fd7a