Inaction

[F1]: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9n6gld/dont_drown_me/e7ky1vv/?context=3

[F2]: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9n6xxg/cove/e7kyut2/?context=3

I recently sabotaged a 5 month dating string by being over-accommodating, and not being forward with my intentions enough. We are meeting up to have a conversation on our relationship and I have a feeling this is my last chance to make something happen. The person is an English teacher, and I haven't written for years. She is going to be receiving this and I need to workout the kinks. Any feedback is greatly appreciated as I know her ability to analyze is better than my ability to write.

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Amorphous murmur.

Evocative susurration.

Invading the consciousness.

Rhapsodic inflection.

Incorporeal.

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Inexorable, yet mellifluous.

Piercing, Hypnotic.

Allure of bliss,

Supressed.

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"Hello?",

Enchanting avowal,

Evanescent.

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Staggering reluctance,

Serendipitous encounter.

Belated revelation,

Ineffable moment,

Ephemeral.

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Vestige to stalk,

Obstinate sentiment.

Transient emotion,

Paramount to clutch.

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Untimely Elucidated,

"Has it expired?"

Trepidation. Consternation.

Anguish Envelopes.

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Faux Pas.

"Can I prevail?"

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Banished,

Oblivion encroaches.

Contest the void.

"I will not relinquish".

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Asphyxiated.

Stillness.

Fading.

Null.

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A Consequence of inaction.

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