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Don’t Drown Me

Feedback Received!

Clear skies darkened

Cold sharp breeze

Which has harkened

A hollow ease

Flashing light

Strikes the sea

Please

Don’t drown me

/

Waves crashing

Rudder lost

Wind amassing

Sails are tossed

Hold the line

Hopefully

Please

Don’t drown me

/

Breached hull

Shot flare

Lost soul

Wet despair

Treading sea

Gasp for air

Please

Don’t drown me

//

Just some more random ramblings. Any input appreciated.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9mqdhb/comment/e7jzhbe?st=JN4183UQ&sh=e7868b8d

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9mnesk/comment/e7jzsfv?st=JN418UTJ&sh=bdc489a7

Posted Oct 11, 2018, 3:36 AM UTC

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