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Freckles and Scars

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How beautiful
It is to think
They exist
To show our frailty

 

These constellations
On our bodies
Reminders dimpled deep within
Marks of where we are today
As well as where
We’ve ever been

 

How beautiful
It is to think
They exist
To show our frailty

 

So doubt for not
One second more
That dots and strokes left on our skin
Speak volumes deeper of our lives
Than lines on paper
Scratched with pen

 

How beautiful
It is to think
They exist
To show our frailty


Does it need something in the middle to convey why one shouldn't doubt? I'm conflicted.


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9saqb8/hearth_heart/e8np1yk/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9scenf/i_would_rather/e8npqfu/

Posted Oct 29, 2018, 12:25 PM UTC · edited

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