Idling

Counting waves

Wash the shore

On a sunny day.

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I want to go with you.

This feeling is no hue

At all.

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Sleep's evasive, all consuming,

When I dream of being

Your crowning jewel.

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Tell me more, tell me more

Tell me more.

I need reason to be adored.

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Hide away, hide away

Make your great escape.

Keep running to that next mistake.

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Feedback:

1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/96gzdv/tammy/e40t8t5/?context=3

2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9lvjt1/never_forget/e7aeje3/?context=3