[Feedback Request] Awake in bed

(posted this in a share thread, but would like some feedback)

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I wake up next to you again

And as you lay there sleeping

I felt my heart softly beating

And outside hear the tapping of rain

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In the moments that are forever ours.

I feel the temptation of your lips,

And the soft caress of your finger tips,

As I embrace you and sleep for hours

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