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Spusk

Growth

Feedback Received!

How fantastic is that tiny bone,

that tickling extrusion that lets you climb,

balancing, leisurely flicking strips of red

blur forest green grass and bamboo stalks,

and how many leaves must I eat before

there is more room for them to grow?

A little improvement

and some peace of mind

may allow an answer to your questions.

[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9wu8ns/fight_on/e9no757)

[2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9wt5qy/digital_jungle_haiku/e9nohwa)

Posted Nov 15, 2018, 12:19 AM UTC

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