r/OCPoetry•
Broodd

if only you were kind

Feedback Received!

You cracked open a smile

and kept it controlled -

you gave her your coat

just because it was cold.

​

You lit a few candles

shut your mouth when you chewed -

if it all goes as planned

you'll soon both be nude.

​

She sleeps soundly now

after taking a piss -

you know that it's weird

but you gave her a kiss.

​

Blued in the moonlight

Alone in the snow

You wish you were with her,

but you're too polite.

​

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9xrzs2/a_daughter_is_not_a_hammer/e9wd0hn

​

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/9xxoba/pain/e9wcgmd

Posted Nov 19, 2018, 5:49 AM UTC · edited

77
Loading comments…