My big thing would be plabe shift and teleport and plane shift which the luggage couldnt do. It could run under water and through walls but when the traveler was in the magical realm shifting store it was helpless and confused
I highly recommend keeping a stat block on a single page
"Natural" should be lowercase
The average of 18d6 + 54 is 117, not 108
Medium creatures use a d8 Hit Die, not d6
Add a space between average and calculated HP
Add a space before "ft" in Speed
A CR 10 creature has a +5 proficiency bonus, not +6. All skill bonuses should be 1 lower (2 for Intimidation)
"resistances" and "immunities" should be capitalized
Condition Immunities should come after Damage Immunities
Conditions and damage types should be lowercase
Add a comma after "fire"
Remove "damage" from Damage Immunities
"nonmagical" doesn't have a hyphen
Either change "sources" to "attacks", or remove that ride and add "nonmagical" before "bludgeoning"
Psychic should come before BPS and should be separated by a semicolon, not a comma
"Understands" should be lowercase
Remove "spoken"
"cannot" should be "can't"
Each trait and action option name should be followed by a bold period
Charge
"in a straight line, then hits with a target with its bite attack" should be "straight toward a target and then hits it with a bite attack on the same turn"
"succeet" should be "succeed"
There's no such thing as a "Strength (athletics) save". It should be "Strength saving throw"
Chosen Master
Remove "chosen" before "master" (x2)
"existance" should be "existence"
"Plane Shift" and "Teleport" should be lowercase and italicized
I would change it to "It can treat its master like a permanent teleportation circle when casting plane shift or teleport."
Constructed nature
"nature" should be capitalized
"does not" should be "doesn't"
"need to" should be "require" and the list should be "air, food, drink, or sleep."
This should appear outside the stat block within the lore section
Innate Spellcasting
"luggage" should be capitalized
This creature can't speak, so how does it provide the verbal components for its spells? And does it have hands with the manual dexterity for somatic components?
Spell names should be lowercase
"(self only)" shouldn't be italicized
Magic resistant
"resistant" should be "Resistance" (capitalized)
"or" should be "and other"
Terrifying Appearance
Remove this trait. Its mechanics are accounted for elsewhere in the stat block, so it serves no purpose.
Multiattack
"Bite" should be lowercase (x2)
Change the second sentence to "On a hit, it can use its Engulf once."
Bite
Add a space before "ft"
Add a colon after "Hit"
The average of 4d6 + 3 is 17, not 15
Engulf
"luggage" should be capitalized
Change "that was hit by its Bite attack since the beginning of its current turn." to "that it has hit with a bite attack this turn."
"The" should be lowercase (x2)
17, not 15
"Bludgeoning" should be lowercase
Does the creature have total cover against effects outside the Luggage?
What happens if the Luggage dies?
Overrun
"recharge" should be capitalized
The average of 6d6 + 3 is 24, not 21
"Bludgeoning" should be lowercase
"is not" should be "isn't knocked"
Reactive Bite
"Bite" should be lowercase
Add "against it" to the end
Lore
Each of your headings should be one heading level lower
Each heading should use title casting (e.g., "out" and "magic" should be capitalized)
Change "are gathered" to "gather"
"posessions" should be "possessions"
"moments" should be "moment's"
Why did you capitalize "Pearwood" in Bloody Single-Mindedness, but not in Made Out of Magic?
"It is very difficult to stop or even damage the Luggage. The luggage has no discernable eyes". You need to be more consistent in capitalizing "Luggage"
"discernable" should be "discernible"
"Stubborness" should be "Stubbornness"
"does not" should be "doesn't"
"cannot" should be "can't"
Is the master exclusively male? Why did you say "himself"? Does this creature have a gender bias?
Why did "Chosen Master" suddenly get capitalized in Actual Luggage but not anywhere else?
"lugage" should be "Luggage" (with two Gs)
"Bag of Holding" should be lowercase
Credit
This should not be in a read-aloud box, which is a box that contains text the DM is meant to read out loud to the table. Use a sidebar instead.
My big thing would be plabe shift and teleport and plane shift which the luggage couldnt do. It could run under water and through walls but when the traveler was in the magical realm shifting store it was helpless and confused